Well written but in need of lots of stills/videos to compare and contrast your work with real Ska videos/imagery. Also - ancillary tasks! Must include.
Most of the Prezi needs more images/examples. E.g. when you talk about Ska conventions (m-e-s, themes, etc.). It also needs them when you talk about the conventions you met/challenged - to show the points you're making. Include your video as a whole too.
Check grammar in places - conclusion in particular.
You put 'affective' rather than 'effective' in some places.
B-
Add examples and cover ancillary tasks for a solid A
Well written but in need of lots of stills/videos to compare and contrast your work with real Ska videos/imagery. Also - ancillary tasks! Must include.
ReplyDeleteMost of the Prezi needs more images/examples. E.g. when you talk about Ska conventions (m-e-s, themes, etc.). It also needs them when you talk about the conventions you met/challenged - to show the points you're making. Include your video as a whole too.
Check grammar in places - conclusion in particular.
You put 'affective' rather than 'effective' in some places.
B-
Add examples and cover ancillary tasks for a solid A