more vids & pics (examples basically) needed for every section, and not all from one artist - use a range of 3, 4 or more bands
check spelling and grammar - especially MISE-EN-SCENE!
iconography needs more - clothes, locations etc - what do they communicate? remember the genre and themes are 'of a time' - lots of class wars, social commentary, humour in the face of adversity.
good, but can be better
ReplyDeletemore vids & pics (examples basically) needed for every section, and not all from one artist - use a range of 3, 4 or more bands
check spelling and grammar - especially MISE-EN-SCENE!
iconography needs more - clothes, locations etc - what do they communicate? remember the genre and themes are 'of a time' - lots of class wars, social commentary, humour in the face of adversity.
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